Critique
of Chapter 6
In this chapter
of The Hip Hop Wars, it basically focuses on the phrases “keeping it real.”
This phrase has been misused by many artists just because they want their album
or song on top. Some artists sometimes use this phrase to describe their style
of music because in their songs they describe where they come from, which most likely
will be from the ghetto. These artists have so much power to with their words,
but decide to use it to talk about the money, cars and hoes as well as the
ghetto where they are from and make it seem like a horrible crime scene. They
make the ghetto seem like it’s all bad, they don’t mention some of the people
that have made it out the ghetto and got themselves a good education or about
how many African American men are in jail while the women have to take on so
much responsibility to support the family without a man there to help them out.
Reading
this chapter made me realize how much power hip hop has on our community. It
also makes me wonder why anybody would want to be something they are not just
to get their songs or albums sold. To me, it’s almost like they are being
inconsiderate and it’s not hurting them at the end of the day because they
still make their money. But instead it makes Americans think living in a ghetto
means that your life is full of violence, and that the people living in the
ghetto have built everything around them. Also that they are living that kind of
life because they enjoy it which makes most African Americans look bad because
that’s where most of them live.
Good start to the blog.
ReplyDeleteBe careful with run on sentences. The last sentence on this post is a good example of a run on.